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The Scent of Burning Stars

This is one of the prompts I submitted for this week’s Odd Prompts challenge.

The stars look different from the vantage point of space, away from atmosphere and pollutants, microsatellites and fragments of debris cluttering the hopes of astronomers for decades.

They glow, the stars, in helix patterns and spirals, shining reds and purples and blues, glowing vortexes and streaks of golden stardust. Swirls of asteroid hurtle past, forming rings and eyes, glittering auras too numerous to form constellations.

I’m privileged to have seen this from above the azure oceans, greens and browns and blues and shining lights of the planet I used to call home. There aren’t many of us who have made it up here, with the robots coming to take the dangerous space jobs.

Until the colonization ships are done, most people won’t make it off Earth. Most people don’t even want to leave, tied to families and homes and jobs they don’t enjoy. And the ships we’re building won’t have windows, the shuttles will land straight in the bay, automated from liftoff to transport to the stars, straight into the belly of a metal giant that will lead the people to a new land. No one leaving Earth will have this view.

I’ll never return, now, drifting on the waves of stardust, breathing in the scent of burning stars, filling my lungs with frozen starlight.

I spin myself, swirling gently, the tether snapped, too far away for the humans to survive getting me now. The bots are programmed to human safety standards. They won’t retrieve me, and I’ve gone the wrong way to join the atmosphere’s debris, a fiery human meteorite.

A last glimpse of homesick planetside existence, and I let the stars embrace me, one last time.

A Tethered Ring

It’s week three of the More Odds Than Ends writing prompt challenge! This week, my task was from Leigh Kimmel: “Strange visit to a place at night—moonlight—castle of great magnificence etc. Daylight shews either abandonment or unrecognisable ruins—perhaps of vast antiquity.”

Savannah tipped back the last of the bottle of strawberry wine, her throat working as she balanced it above her lips. The combination of sweetness and bubbles made her lips tingle. She set the empty flask down at her feet and shoved the cork back in the neck.

“This makes it worth it,” she proclaimed triumphantly, waving her free hand in the air. Unbalanced, she kicked the bottle toward the fire and hastily reached down to grab it before it could roll into the flames.

“Primitive camping,” Savannah said with a snort. “How you talked me into this when we’re not even supposed…oh.”

Kaylee was sleeping peacefully in her camp chair, she saw, her friend’s own bottle of dandelion wine hugged in her arms like a glass teddy bear.

“Hmph,” she said to the glowing embers, and glanced around. There was plenty of dead wood in the copse of oak and plane trees, but she wasn’t sure adding more was a good idea with how much wine she’d had.

The grove was a perfect circle, with enough room for the tent she and Kaylee shared and safe enough for the small and merry fire. Its only opening showed the ruins they’d trekked all this way to see. They’d positioned their chairs toward the view.

Yawning, she blinked at the crumbled castle in front of her. Moonlight streamed down from a pitted, full globe. Only a few walls remained, with an arched entrance that led only to untidy piles of mossy rocks. A ruined tower loomed above, dark and silent, watchful.

Savannah knew the other side was obliterated to time and artillery, crushed in some battle Kaylee would know. From this angle, perfect castellation allowed anachronistic lies. She could nearly see the watchman at his post, and smiled at her brief whimsy.

“Good day to ye, mistress,” a voice said.

Savannah looked up, blinking at unexpected daylight. A haze of purple and gold streaked the sky. It looked like sundown, but she couldn’t believe she’d have slept that long, wine or no.

“Hello,” she said cautiously.

A woman stepped into the clearing, wicker basket filled with greens and mushrooms on her arm. Her long brown hair was pinned up and covered, and her long yellow dress was covered with a green tunic and belted simply around the waist.

“Are you headed to the keep? I’d be pleased for company on the walk,” the stranger said. “I am Isabella.”

Savannah looked around, her head still muddled. Kaylee was gone, as was their tent. Her comfortable chair had turned into a tree stump.

“The – the keep?” She felt her teeth begin to chatter as her jaw twitched.

The other woman looked at her with concern in her whiskey-colored eyes. “Aye, mistress. Atop the hill, of course. Dark be coming. They’ll close the gates soon. Market continues after, of course.”

Savannah’s gaze sped to the ruins. The castle shone, bright white and grey rock against the sun-streaked sky. A horse pulled a cart up a dirt path leading toward the keep, while children chased after a stray chicken and encouraged sheep through an archway filled with a bustling crowd. Manure and woodsmoke scented the air.

On the tower parapet, a guard holding a glaive leaned lazily against the castellated stone. Another paced by behind him, looking out toward the river by the way he moved.

“Mistress? Are ye well?” Isabella took a few steps toward her.

Savannah stared at the ground and thus had an excellent view of Isabella’s leather turnshoes, clearly handmade and wrapped round with leather straps.

The clearing spun around her, the perfect circle spinning into an emerald blur.

“Mistress?”

The Ducks March to War

This was the prompt I submitted for Week Two of the Odd Prompts challenge.

Alise lined up her dolls along the long side of the table. Her small hands showed none of the usual childlike clumsiness, each movement deliberate and precise. Each doll’s stray locks of hair had been tugged unwilling into martial buns. Tiny shoes shone polished and bright, dangling under a purple plastic rectangle at unnatural plastic angles, inches above shell pink carpet. One miniature chair remained empty.

She pushed ruffled white lace aside, grimacing as the voluminous folds of fabric fell back onto her hands. From under her bed, she revealed a battered shoebox, held shut with a rubber band. The brittle band snapped when she touched it, haste making her hands clumsy again. She pulled off the soft cardboard lid and let out a breath at the sight.

“I have something special for you, Gemma,” Alise whispered, with a sideways glance at the half-open door. It wouldn’t do for Mother to overhear. “Today, you get a special accessory.”

She dug in her skirt pocket. Miss Hardy had given her two gold stars today, but she’d been rushed in handing them out as students headed for the line of impatient parents and piano lessons. These stars still had the precious sticky backing, and that meant they were perfect.

She held her breath as she lifted the doll out of the box at last, her ears near ringing by the time the application was done. Each star was aligned with precision, one on each shoulder.

Alise glanced at the door again with a guilty heart, her stomach doing a funny flip. She’d tried to make Mother happy, but it never seemed to end well. The unwanted purse was left forgotten in a mall store, resulting in a tense trip back to multiple stores to find it. Sore feet and multiple apologies later, she’d dared to ask why it was so important to retrieve an empty purse and accidentally kicked off the furor again.

Or the time she’d been prissed up in a fluffy dress and curls, but had found playing in the rain with her boy cousins to be far more fun than a boring game of house with the girls, who’d stayed in the stuffy basement, afraid to get wet, afraid of worms. How was she supposed to know there would be a family photo? She’d never been to a family reunion before, and she’d been told to play and leave the adults alone.

Lips firming, Alise put General Gemma at the head of the line. The row of dolls stared at her blankly. It was time to set up the opposition.

Getting up, she nearly tripped over her shiny patent leather Mary Janes. She hated those shoes, uncomfortable and stiff, hobbling her ability to run. Every scuff unladylike, every mention of them a discussion on proper behavior. She kicked the despicable shoes under the end of the bed, reached up, and grabbed a very special item from her collection of stuffed animals.

The duck was fuzzy, battered, and one-eyed. Each month, she had to fight to keep her favorite, the less-than-perfect toy. Only that her gran had given her the toy saved Pirate from the donation bin. Alise hugged him to her stomach with a quick clench at the idea of some other child handling him, maybe even losing him.

A last quick pet of matted fur, and she placed Pirate with reverence across from General Gemma. She had to run into the bathroom to sneak out the last of what she needed, but soon a row of rubber ducks faced the dolls. She stood and nodded once, satisfied.

“Let it begin,” Alise said, her hands clasped in front of her, raised to her mouth as if trying to hide her delight. She dropped to her knees and lifted a hand to take hold of Pirate.

A footstep outside the door stopped her mid-reach.

“What are you doing, Alise?”

She straightened. “Hello, Mother.”

The woman was tall, made more so by three inch heels and upswept blonde hair. She frowned, her height looming over the little girl as she stepped inside and looked down. Her nose wrinkled involuntarily at the sight of the ragged duck before she paused and smoothed out her face, porcelain perfection beginning the inevitable mar of age.

“What on Earth is this?” She toed a rubber duck with a blue, pointed toe. “These ducks belong in the bathtub. And in the bin, but we’ll go through this again next week, won’t we.”

Alise stood up, tired of being towered over and annoyed her perfect moment had been interrupted. She planted her feet and crossed her arms. “Nothing.”

“You went to a lot of effort for nothing,” her mother pressed. “This is the oddest tea party I’ve ever seen. What have you done to the dolls’ hair? I’d better not find it’s been cut.”

She unfolded her arms, sighed, and shifted her weight. Clenching tiny fists by her sides, she looked up. “It’s peace neigh goat stations.”

Her mother blinked. “Peace negotiations? Where on earth did you learn about that? Did Gran let you watch C-SPAN again?”

“No,” Alise muttered, and kicked a foot against the carpet.

“Alise!” The words were sharp and dropped into the pink monstrosity of a room like a firecracker.

Alise wished it had been a real firecracker. Maybe she’d get to choose a better color if the room was destroyed. One she actually liked.

Her mother sniffed and turned to leave. As she walked down the hall, she called back. “Clean this up and change your clothes. We’re going out.”

Her face fell, but she knew better than to dare disobey.

“I guess that’s it, General Gemma,” she whispered. Her lip trembled, but she pretended not to see the drop of water that fell on the General’s face. “Neigh goat stations have failed. It will be war.”

She could have sworn Pirate winked at her.

Tomorrow is Beautiful

You can look up at the moon and see the theme parks anytime the moon is full, these days. Everyone says it looks lopsided when the waning begins and the bubble disappears, but watching it wax open is like watching a strange, stony flower bloom now.

It doesn’t even cost that much to go, thanks to the railgun launches. But it all boiled down to one man’s belief in imagination.

Yeah, I see you know who I mean. So you know the investment he made into getting there, and making sure everyone else could get there too. He thought big, that man.

Good man. Met him once. I was just a kid, but he asked me what I thought on one of the terrestrial rides. Nodded, took me seriously, listened to my suggestions. Even shook my hand. Great man.

Boy, it’s a good thing he lived until the eighties, especially after that health scare he had in the mid-sixties. Experimental treatments saved the day, no kidding there. We nearly lost him, though of course we didn’t know it at the time.

Kept the space program open, he did, after the public lost interest. You think space tourism is good now, well, there’s no way it would have existed without him.

They had a tough time those first few years, too. Gravity works differently, or something. Cost complaints and whatnot. All the math for the coasters had to be redone. I hear the engineers were bouncing around in the first big bubble, pulling their hair out. I bet it was hilarious.

But you can’t have someone go in for a loop-de-loop and wind up launched past the life support. It’s funny, you’d think being launched into space would be enough of a thrill, but everybody wants to do something when they get there.

So yeah. We owe the guy. Big hero. He’s the reason we’ve got a colony program in the works. They’re naming the ship after him, I heard.

Aw, I know I said it was the investment, but it’s never just the money. He kept the dream alive, you know?

Who else coulda done that, eh? You give me one good name.

So what if the moon looks like it has big round ears now?

You want to go to space or not, kid?

***

Theme parks on the moon” was my submission for this week’s More Odds Than Ends writing prompt weekly challenge. When I have the time, I’ll take a hack at my own. I’m really curious how they’ll turn out from other people!

Kintsugi

Prompt: A woman wakes up a week after her husband’s funeral. Describe how her morning routine has changed without mentioning her husband.

Note: It turns out that when you start a conversation with “Hey, honey, I have to write about when you’re dead,” the resultant eyebrow twitch and physical removal to a safe distance should be expected. It is, in fact, an appropriate response.

***

The silence was crushing her.

She lay in bed, unwilling to move. It would be generous to still call the late golden sunlight streaming inside “morning.” Light had to be compressed luminosity, full daylight strong, to meander its way past the blackout curtains.

Mornings should be muted dark and nudging, foggy without caffeine, rushed with an exit goal in mind. Or on those rare occasions where time was forgotten, playful and filled with laughter, twisted sheets and warmth.

She turned her head away from the window, repulsed by lost memories. The gaping void of a perfectly-made bed half slapped her in the face as it had every day of the past week instead.

The resultant nausea got her out of bed, at least. She bared her teeth in the mirror, avoiding her reflection’s eyes. Hatred for the toothpaste’s false advertising welled up inside her as she went through mechanical motions. Her smile would not be bright by the time she finished, she knew.

Silence continued to follow her, omniscient and ubiquitous.

The kitchen was finally empty of well-wishers and commiserations she didn’t want. The freezer was stuffed with food she wouldn’t eat. She’d been caught trying to throw it out, but spared the usual and expected lecture on wastefulness. Her mother’s diatribe would have been better than the pitying look.

Automatically setting out two cups for coffee, her hand clenched around the mug on the left.

She wondered if it would be better to shatter it, smash it into pieces. But she put it back, unable to bear the loss of one more memory.

She had no idea how long she stood there, staring into hollow oblivion, waiting for coffee from a cold and quiet machine.

A newly installed door thrust open into the kitchen, hinges squeaking with disuse. Her hand convulsed on the counter at the noise. She turned to find a shaggy black face with a blunt snout and giant brown eyes staring up at her, having trouble with a door flap installed for a giant.

The woman twisted away. What had made her brother give her a puppy? He hated dogs. Dogs only reminded her of unfulfilled dreams. What was she going to do with a gamboling mass of fur that at over twenty pounds was a tenth of his full-grown size?

She sighed. Panting noises followed her around the kitchen. “You have food, newfie,” she muttered downward, and received a cold nose on her leg as a reward.

The couch enveloped her with the ease of long practice. Brown, to hide the inevitable coffee stains, and now apparently also fur. She frowned as the puppy clambered up beside her. It took him three uncoordinated attempts to succeed before he snuggled into her lap, drooling.

“Get down,” she said, but she didn’t mean it. The puppy closed his eyes. Her hand tangled in thick, warm fur, and she realized his breathing had kept the silent fugue from returning.

“Guess I should give you a name.”

***

Edit: Link to More Odds than Ends week one prompt list.

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