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When Disaster Strikes

“Like this?” June sliced the apple in half with great enthusiasm and vigor. The top half skittered on a dusting of flour before landing on the floor with a thud. The bottom of the Granny Smith wobbled, then spiraled in an elliptical orbit of green and white, straight toward the pie crust Helen was rolling on the other half of the countertop.

Helen caught the escaping half and returned it to June, pursing her lips slightly before putting on what June thought of as her diplomat face. “Not quite, dear, you forgot to peel that one before slicing.”

Peter snagged the apple half on the floor with poorly suppressed laughter making the corners of his mouth twitch. “I think they’re supposed to be cut down the vertical middle, not the horizontal.”

“Hush,” Helen said. “I’m glad June wanted to help. I don’t see you helping, now do I.”

“I warned you, Mum.” He rinsed off the apple half, took a bite of the fruit, and wrenched his head sideways at the tartness.

“Peter Caden Ridere, I did not raise you to be rude.” Helen gave a full body wave of the rolling pin in his direction, her salt and pepper hair emphatically shifting with the effort. A strand stuck to her forehead. “Check on the turkey, love.”

“It’s true,” June rushed to reassure her. A cloud of flour rose as she tried to dust off her clothing. She gave up and began to use the chef’s knife to peel the apple skin back. “People don’t normally let me in the kitchen.”

“I do appreciate the assistance. I’d like to make sure it’s right before we have the faculty over. We cooked a few times to host Americans, of course, but this will be our first Thanksgiving in the United States.”

“Practice makes perfect. And gives us extra dinner.” The scent of cooking poultry filled the kitchen. Peter studied the steaming pot of potatoes on the stainless steel professional model stove. “Bird looks fine. These are close to boiling.”

“How small is the apple supposed to be without the peel?” June asked. “Ow!”

Red drops dripped onto the countertop, just as the water overflowed with a hiss. The gas burner flickered out. Helen sighed.

“There’ll be bandages under the sink in that lav off to the side there, love. Peter, if you aren’t going to help, why don’t you taste test that pumpkin pie and get out of the way?”

June headed for the restroom to clean up with a tea towel clenched in her hand. Helen turned off the stove and eyed the potatoes.

Peter beelined for the orange circle to cut himself the first slice. “Smells great. Like autumn, all cinnamon and nutmeg. I’ve grown partial to the diner’s pies.”

“This custard’s a new recipe,” Helen admitted, stirring the potatoes with a wooden spoon and turning the burner on again. “June helped me make it earlier today.”

He coughed into a napkin. “I can tell.”

She smacked his hand with the dripping wooden spoon. “What did I say about being rude? It can’t be that bad. Just a bit of an incident with the pressure cooker, and we cleaned up most of the mess before you got here.”

“Other than the stains on the ceiling, sure.” Peter reached into the napkin and pulled out a metal teaspoon. “Flavor’s great, except for the extra iron.”

Helen’s lips opened, but air merely wheezed between her teeth for a few seconds. “Well.” Another breath. “Well.”

June reentered the formerly spotless kitchen, mumbling apologies. “Let me just clean this up.”

She wiped down the counter with a paper towel, pulling apple peels the size of sliced apples toward the trash can, holding the bag in one hand. The trash can bounced away with a ringing clang of metal. June knocked the handle of the knife she’d cut herself with an elbow. She spun, and the blade slid straight through the plastic bag of trash to embed in the floorboards. Potato, carrot, and apple peels oozed onto the once-pristine floor, mixing with flour to form a slippery paste that piled against the steel knife.

A gizzard plopped onto the hilt. June backed away, into the counter. “Oof. My kidneys.” She bit her lip and overcorrected with a wild swing of her arm. Helen’s wine glass crashed to the other side of the kitchen island.

Helen sucked air through her teeth again. And again, with an odd whistle. She snatched a hot pad and tossed it at June. “Out! Out of my kitchen!”

Peter chortled, following his girlfriend as she fled out the back door and into chill autumn air. “Wait until you hear the egg salad story.”

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Becky Jones prompted me this week with “It seemed that breaking things was becoming a habit for her.” My prompt went to nother Mike, inspired by a recent morning’s drive: The sky suited the day, with bruised-peach coloration and a red-tinged moon.

The Day the Sunlight Died

June pulled Big Red to a stop and shut off the aged truck with her habitual pat of encouragement to the dash. Peter’s silence weighed heavily in the interim, broken only by the engine’s ticking. The last car had passed them five miles back, and weeds lined the fence that enclosed their destination.

“You’ve a few of these, then.” His voice was quiet, but the censure in his voice filled the cab.

June reached underneath the driver’s seat and pulled out a ring of keys. It clinked as she sorted through the labels on near-identical silver pieces of metal. “You knew that when you invited yourself on this trip.”

“I knew.” He ran a hand through his hair and took off his glasses to rub his eyes. “Reality turned out to be a mite different after the thirteenth stop.”

Her own dry eyes ached with the grit from driving the past six hours. Towing the RV behind her ancient truck always felt like a struggle against prairie winds, even if there weren’t as many drivers in the state compared to the mistake that Chicago had been. Gripping the steering wheel in one hand, she held up a slim silver tab with the other, trying to ignore the knot behind her shoulder blades. “South Dakota.”

He sighed and opened the truck door. “As long as we see an American buffalo while we’re in the area.”

June’s boots hit gravel before it smoothed into pavement. She slammed the door. “Probably not inside the storage facility. And this is number seventeen, not thirteen.”

“How you can tell the difference is beyond me.” Peter held a hand to the keypad. A burst of light, and the lock clanked open. “Which unit are we looking for?”

Her mouth was still agape to tell him the code when she snapped her jaw shut. “One one three one.”

A faint covering of dust made her shiver. The tracks Peter left looked downright apocalyptic, with low weeks and only a mournful bird in the distance. How long it had been since anyone else had visited the facility?

“Manual locks.” Disgust filled the air as she caught up with him. He snagged the key from her extended hand, turned it so hard she feared it might snap, and bent to lift the roll door.

“Same as last time,” June said and stepped into the darkness. “I think this one had a pull light.” Her hand found the cord. “There it is.”

“Yes.” Peter drew the sentence out. He didn’t move into the storage unit. “Same as last time. And the time before.”

“I warned you.” She tightened her lips and headed for the first Pelican case. June turned with it in her hands to find her path blocked.

“Warned, yes, but never explained, a ghrá. Seventeen different storage units, and we’re not yet done. Not a single one opened, just stashed in the RV wherever we still have room. All I’ve seen is cases of bottled water.” He held out a hand, palm upward, and gestured at the stacked boxes behind her. “You owe me an explanation at this point, June.”

She bit her lip, cognizant that it was a habit she’d been trying to break. A deep breath, and she set the case down on the concrete floor. The cold seeped through her jeans at the knees as she popped each latch open. The box almost snorted as the sides parted, as if the air captured years before inside the container’s plastic maw resented its mixture with modern oxygen molecules.

The plastic was smooth against her hand, until it stuck on a suddenly sweaty palm. “Black is weapons,” she managed, and flipped the lid open. “I color coded them. Black is always weapons.”

Resting on the exposed foam rested a series of daggers in varying sizes. The longest could technically qualify as a short sword. She reached out to a strange pair of decorative sticks and twisted her hair in an automatic pattern her fingers knew from long practice. Each pointed stick stabbed into the bun and held it in place. A strand of hair floated to the ground from where it had been sliced clean. “Hmm. I’m out of practice.”

She got to her feet, carefully not looking in Peter’s direction, and headed to the back of the unit, past the stack of black that reached her shoulder. Her back twinged as she hauled a different case forward, too quickly, and flipped the latches. “Desert tan is the emergency kit, kept sealed inside a case so nothing gets inside and trashes it. Bug out bag with a hard drive of documents and photos, a stash of freeze-dried food, a first-aid kit.”

The lone khaki-colored case tipped, spilling a backpack onto the floor. She hadn’t closed the bag properly, and a colorful blur skittered farther away as a box burst open.

“And the olive boxes?” This time, he sounded concerned.

“Basics. Clothes, boots. Cash. Sometimes gold. Enough to buy or trade for a vehicle.” She hesitated, still turned away, and wrapped her arms around her queasy stomach.

Footsteps started, then paused. “You stashed candy?”

“Fast energy,” she answered automatically. “As long as it’s sealed, it’s fine.”

“This sweet looks odd.” A crinkle, and she could feel his frown in the small room. “And it’s oddly heavy.”

“Don’t eat that one,” she warned. Turning, she kept her arms crossed. “You’ll break your teeth. I hid at least one gold bar in each box of candy bars. I had this theory that someone breaking in would steal the cash and weapons, but wouldn’t bother with survival gear or snacks.”

Peter froze for a few seconds, then carefully set down the disguised chocolate. He rose to his feet, dusting off his trousers. “June.”

“Peter,” she answered. Misery filled her throat. “I know how it sounds. Utterly paranoid. I didn’t want to tell you.”

“June, darling, what on this green earth was chasing you?”

She tried a smile, and half her lip managed an upward movement for some nebulous fraction of a second. “I don’t know. They never found what murdered my parents. John got me onto his land before it could find me, too, and that protection lasted while I stayed on his property. When I left, I didn’t know what would be waiting for me.”

“So you wanted to be prepared for anything.” He studied her, lenses glaring under the bare bulb light unit.

June clenched her hands around her middle tighter. “If I could run, I could get to one of the storage units. I could get away.”

“What you really mean, then…” He studied the ceiling, and she watched his throat as he swallowed. “This means shutting down the storage units is a big step for you.”

“I’m trying to move on,” she whispered.

Peter stepped toward her and wrapped her in his arms. “I understand.”

“Thank you.” The relief she felt brought peace, even if it added to her exhaustion.

From outside the doorway came the scrape of a footstep, moments before the door banged closed with a metallic roar and blocked the sun.

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This week, ‘nother Mike’s prompt fit neatly into something I’d preplanned with Peter and June’s story, and I loved the idea of planting a hidden gold bar mixed among the candy bars. My prompt went to Cedar, about the unsuspecting, balding thief.

Harbinger of Rabbits

Gina gave a tight smile and set her teacup back into its saucer with a double clink and hid a wince. It was less firm than she’d have preferred. Confidence, that was key. She straightened her shoulders, grateful her back was to a wall, and tried to widen her expression into something welcoming. “It’s been a while since I’ve had anyone over. I’m afraid I’m out of practice.”

The words passed muster. Samantha tucked a nonexistent strand of hair behind one ear and re-crossed her legs. The duchess slant, of course, and her shoulders were already straight beneath the shell-pink cardigan and matching pearls. “The pandemic was hard upon us all.”

Gina covered her jolt with a sip of tea. “Yes…yes, of course.”

She didn’t relax for another hour, but the other woman had agreed Olivia could join her precious princesses twice a week, and that was what she needed. “Let the indoctrination begin,” she murmured to the photo on the wall, with a hand upon the tension in her lower back as she shut the door. No one needed to know the snapshot of a bearded man camping was stolen from the internet in an attempt to look normal. She rubbed her neck and stretched. “It’s a step toward trust, anyway.”

“What’s indoctrination, Mommy?” The voice broke through her reverie.

Her grin was real this time. The carpet rubbed across exposed knees as Gina knelt down and opened her arms for a hug. “Nothing, honey. Remember Samantha? She’s a little formal, that’s all.”

Stepford wives formal, but there’d be time enough for that conversation in a few years. She hoped. Besides, it might provide stability amongst all the moves.

Olivia wrinkled her nose and tossed her head, dropping her fuzzy school bag by the plastic desk and aiming straight for the miniature kitchen with its plastic food. “I’ll cook dinner!”

“Sounds delicious.” Gina put both hands on her neck this time, pressing to the point of pain. “We’ve been in this house a while. Do you like it here?”

“S’okay,” her daughter mumbled. Plastic pots and pans banged against each other. “Chicken! I miss the woods. And my pet chicken.”

They’d left the last house at a dead run, minutes ahead of the harbinger. Gina’s adrenaline spiked at the memory, and she sank back into the floral armchair. Sweat beaded her forehead.

Better Olivia never knew what happened to her beloved chicken. A cloud of white feathers and blood caught in frantic headlights, still drifting in the air, as tires squealed with a desperate crunch of gravel as rubber bit into pavement and the car slewed its burdens, screaming, into the night.

She’d thought they’d be safe if they couldn’t be found by humans. That rural Wisconsin would have offered protection.

Several deep breaths later, she rolled her arms in circles to ease the twitchiness that had been coming on for the past month. Perhaps deciding to trust in Samantha was a bad idea, but she could really use those extra hours at the diner.

“The bunny would be good as a pet,” Olivia said casually, and put plastic spaghetti onto a trash can lid serving in lieu of a plate. “All soft and furry. Do you think he’d let me pet him?”

“Bunny?” Gina went cold. A hand grasped the wall, and she hadn’t realized she’d gotten to her feet. “What bunny? Where is the bunny?”

“Come eat dinner, Mommy.”

Interminable minutes later, Gina had “mmmm’ed” her way through four plates of fake spaghetti. “I guess you’d better get potato peeling duty next.”

“Ew.” Olivia had giggled, and for just a fleeting moment, Gina could pretend all was right with the world, and that the juice she’d served her daughter with plastic food hadn’t been spiked with a sleeping agent.

Her world was still cold when she went into the closet. “Too good to last,” she whispered at the go-bag. Gina studied her phone’s security camera app. “Yep. He’s found us, the little…sniff.”

Habit made her self-censor.

On her doorstep crouched a rabbit, for all the world an adorable bundle of harmless fur. The bunny was innocence personified, even sniffing at one of Olivia’s scattered toys. A ridiculous phobia. Sandie, one of the other waitresses at the diner three houses back, had laughed, even put a stuffed plushie in her locker as a joke.

She knew better. She’d dealt with that twitching nose and whiskers, felt those punishing kicks, had the scars from those claws.

It had only taken a single instance of ignoring the harbinger to understand the doom that trailed behind. She didn’t need to wait until morning.

Sandie had, and look how that had ended.

Gina shouldered the pack and returned to the living room, where her daughter lay oblivious. Every movement was sluggish and frozen, driven by terror so deep it woke her screaming. The instinct to curl into the fetal position was overwhelming. Had it been just her, she might have given in by now. “Sorry, darling. I thought we’d escaped him here.”

She hoisted her daughter’s boneless weight into her arms and balanced the phone in her free hand. The app showed the back door was clear, and the path to the car. It wouldn’t be for long. She wished she’d cut the grass this weekend so she could be sure.

“Just run. Just run.” She set the phone on the low shelf, below where Olivia’s autumn jacket still hung, near outgrown. Phone and jacket would both remain here. The keys next to the phone, she’d keep until they could trade in for another beater, on the way to the next bolt hole. She twisted the keys in her hand until she found the silver one that read Chevrolet. “Get to the car and go.”

Sucking in rapid breaths, she felt the doorknob, near frozen under her sweating palm. “Go,” she repeated. “Just run.”

She was panting by the time she’d dashed the short distance to her car, an ancient station wagon with wood paneling. The keys had fumbled their way into the lock on the third try, a miracle she was properly grateful for. She’d lain Olivia on the front bench seat, still unconscious, and hadn’t bothered to remove the pack before starting the car. She’d stop in a few minutes. Safety would come with escape, not seatbelts.

The engine made an odd whirring noise.

“No. No!” Gina slammed a hand onto the steering wheel and swallowed, trying to steady her shaking hands. “Come on, come on.”

This time, the whir ended with a thump.

Gina looked up slowly, and met the rabbit’s malevolent gaze from where it sat, whiskers twitching, atop the hood of her ancient beater.

She yanked the keys from the ignition, then seized them from the floor. Her lips peeled back with a hiss. If her only weapon were her keys, she would take care of that rodent, once and for all.

Glass shattered.

A snarl escaped Gina’s throat.

Beside her, Olivia slept on.

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This week, Becky Jones prompted me with, “The little rabbit was crouched on her doorstep.” Although this deserves far more attention to properly detail Gina’s terror, I couldn’t let the story be nearly as adorable as the suggestion implied. My prompt went to Leigh Kimmel, “I’m told this is the least human time of year.”

Check more out at MOTE, and please wear your seatbelt.

The Empty House

This post has been removed. Why? Because it’s part of Paladin’s Legacy, book two of the Professor Porter saga. I swear, I’m working on it!

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This week, Becky Jones prompted me with “the empty house stood waiting.” My prompt went to Padre, “the intergalactic mafia.” Check out more at MOTE!

The Great Sponge Expansion

“Do you like your new sponge family, Leila?” Admiral Zeke Farmanzeh watched Allie lean down with a shy grin down at their daughter, the same expression that he’d fallen in love with so many years and planets ago. 

“I do, Mama,” the little girl said. The pert, upturned nose was the same as when the Cuddly But Trouble had launched, but the smile was now gap-toothed. 

Another sign of his little girl getting far too big for his taste, even if her precious, fluffy blue bear the ship was named after still waited on her bunk. Zeke settled most days for being grateful that they’d worked out the gravity well problem. He’d tried listening to the physicists, but – well, he was but an engineer, and all he cared about was that spacers no longer came back weak and brittle. And long term stability – like family life – was possible.

A man could put up with a lot for some stability. It made him forget the stale air and uncertainty of ever returning to Earth.

“These were mine when I was a little girl, you know.” The larger blonde head bobbed closed to his daughter’s curls. They looked so much alike! “We could only bring them because they’re so lightweight, but I wanted you to have them.”

“This is Little’un, and this is Littler’un, and there’s the mama and papa and the dog. They don’t have names yet. Floofbear will help me name them tomorrow.”

His wife gave that smile, the one where she knew she had a secret. “Do you want to see what happens when they go for a dip in the pool? Let’s take them in your bath and find out.”

Water filtration, now that had taken a leap forward, too. Even if they still were on rations, and everyone knew it was recycled water. That ten percent fresh the techies had been able to bring online made a difference. It didn’t taste flat, anymore, even though it tasted the same. Water was water, but indescribably altered.

Zeke pushed himself out of his chair. It pulled itself back into the wall automatically with a whir as he headed for the doorway to watch his girls. These carefree, childlike moments would be increasingly fleeting, especially as Leila continued her advanced studies.

“You see?”

His daughter gave a horrified gasp. “Littler’un was the green sponge! And she’s bigger than Little’un now!”

“And when she dries, she’ll shrink back down again, and fit into her capsule. What do you think, will Little’un fit into his?”

The precious face scrunched in hard thought. “Yes. Because they’re different colors but the same material.”

“Nano sponges will do that, but real sponges that grow in the ocean won’t.”

A giggle. “Sponges are weird.”

“A little bit. Why don’t you join them in the bath?” His wife raised her face to his, and her eyes glittered with mischief. “I think you’re part weird yourself, thanks to your daddy. Don’t you think?”

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Need context? I always wanted these things to repack themselves into neat capsules. Mostly so I could have reusable fun, of course.

Need part one? Find the intro to Leila here.

This week’s MOTE prompt was a trade with AC Young – Little’un and Littler’un trading in size, and magical dust mores. Check out his detailed response – and more! – out here.

But before you go, how about something completely different? My new short story, Santa Baby, is available for preorder along with a whole anthology of stories. About Santa. As a military operator. Because someone’s got to save the day.

I promise it’s ridiculous, in the best of ways. Cheers!

A Temporary Affliction

“No, I definitely need to hit the bookstore. He let me take Magical Zoology II this term,” Mikhail said, and tipped back his battered cowboy hat with an absent hand. It didn’t match his school uniform, but he’d earned the sweat stained, sooty brim through hands now toughened by hard work with enormous livestock.

The calluses came with newfound confidence and efficiency in his spellcasting, which showed in his pre-term placement testing. It had only taken a quick narrowing of slit-pupiled eyes for his schedule to pass muster. Professor Hapburn had even flicked his tongue out in what passed for a pleased salamander smile when Mikhail demonstrated the strength of his camouflage spells.

Of course, Professor Hapburn’s sharp, orange eyes had also not missed the faint hoof print on the hat’s crown, either. Mikhail was certain of it, as certain as he was that he’d be asked to critique his own performance over a strong cup of tea.

Liza blew her bangs upward and tossed the rest of her hair out of her satchel strap’s way as she adjusted the catch. Her braid thunked dully against one of the fire extinguishers floating over her shoulder. “Come on, then. And of course he did. Why wouldn’t he?”

“There’s a secondary intro course he threatened to make me take, if I didn’t stop being so skittish around the more sensitive creatures,” Mikhail answered. “You can’t let the werewolves smell fear. Say, why do you still have those two following you around, anyway?”

He drew his head and shoulders minutely away from his friend as they dodged their way through the hall of returning students. The extinguishers had changed their positions around Liza’s head. There was something menacing in the movement, almost…offended?

“They’re part of the family,” she said casually. “Besides, look.” Liza shoved a crumpled piece of paper into his hand. “That’s cool, right?”

“Maths, herbology, magical gastronomy,” he read aloud. “I have that one, too. What’s wishuu?”

“Djinn combat.” She let out a huge grin that blinded him in its intensity. It wasn’t just the sunlight streaming from the open main doors of Wisurg Magical Academy. 

“Clamp it down,” he cautioned, then reached a hand to catch her elbow before she could stumble down the entrance stairs. He let go almost immediately. “Hey. Uh. Hey. What’s wrong? It’s a beautiful day. I thought you were happy to be back?”

“I am!” The words were a scream. Tears streamed down her face. Liza sank to the stone pavement and sobbed into her hands. “I am so very, delightfully happy!”

He took a step back. “Um. If you say so?”

A hand clapped onto his shoulder, along with a wheezing noise that was half laugh, half resigned sigh. Mikhail turned to find Chef McCreedy in full whites. Any adult, he decided, was better than dealing with girls crying. “Sir, I don’t know what happened. One minute, we were headed for the bookstore and everything was fine.”

“Aye, and the next, the sobbin’ and cryin’, eh, boyo?” 

Yes,” he said emphatically. “That.”

“The finest of rotten traditions.” The chef wiggled thick eyebrows down at Mikhail. The reminder of caterpillars was strong enough, he feared they’d crawl off. “A back-to-school jinx. She’ll be righto in a moment, I b’lieve.”

Even as he spoke, Liza stopped her crying. She lifted her head so rapidly, she bonked her noggin against the hovering, concerned fire extinguishers. “Guys, I’m fine.”

“Good,” he began, then watched in astonishment as she gave the fire extinguishers reassuring pats, as if cuddling nervous puppies.

“She’s not talking to us, boyo,” Chef McCreedy said, and strode off with another bearpaw swipe at Mikhail’s shoulder.

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This week’s Odd Prompt was from nother Mike: It was a bright, sunny day, but all he/she could do was sob and cry…

I can’t wait to see what Leigh Kimmel does with: The sphinx had waited for centuries for the right question to be posed by a petitioner.

Come join the fun!

(Pssst. Mikhail and Liza’s original story can be found in this anthology…and look for more, coming soon!)

The Dreaming Void

Izz stared out the porthole and into the void. Slipspace held the stars at bay, shrouding glimmers of light in fog and haze. She trailed a finger down the side of the metal rim, feeling the grooves cold against callused fingertips hard-won from hours of rewiring Monster‘s electrical systems.

Not the computer systems, oh no. Greaves insisted she needed practice first, an insistence the illegal artificial sentient enforced with mild electric shocks. Practice that didn’t make the long journey to salvage any less boring, and interfered with salvage inventory.

It made her wish they were close to arrival. Sometimes, after all her dreaming, she wished for nothing more than to see the stars again.

“Break’s over.” The chirrupy voice broke into her fugue from the loudspeakers. “Ready to rewire console number four?”

“There’s nothing I’d like more.”

“Lovely.” Syrup couldn’t be sweeter. And Izz was left wondering, yet again, whether her ship didn’t understand sarcasm or habitually ignored it.

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This week on MOTE, nother Mike prompted me with: When you wish upon a star…

My prompt went to Leigh Kimmel: “What do you mean, I’ve been upgraded to a hurricane?”

The Alchemist’s Gift

This post has been removed. Why? Because it’s part of the Professor Porter saga, currently in progress.

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Leigh Kimmel prompted me over at MOTE this week with: “After many years you return to one of your favorite childhood vacation spots and discover…” Check out what AC Young explored with the water pig races in the prompt trade over at the hangout for the odd prompts!

Cyberpunk Mermaid

Merrisai tapped a button on the side of her headband and settled with a sigh into the harbor water. For once, the faint sheen of oil from shipping traffic floating atop the gentle, lapping waves didn’t make her wrinkle her nose with disgust. This, at least, was normal.

She flipped her tail, careless of the water splashing the corporate samurai. Unless he was about to break conditioning and violate orders, he was about to get soaked soon enough.

“I never understood SeaCorp,” the man said, studying what lay in the distance. He did not move to join her, nor did she expect him to do so. The blurred visage of the floating castle rested on the horizon, perpetually out of reach for the uninvited.

“My captor speaks,” murmured Merrisai. She could taste the bitter words on her tongue.

His sharp glance stung. “My name is Canyon. You had a choice. My employer wishes to ensure you keep your bargain.”

She smoothed a nanoscale that had caught on concrete earlier today to hide shaking fingers. Given enough time in the water, it would lay flat again. It would heal.

Unlike her sister.

She looked toward the floating castle and changed the subject. The waves splashed against her bare stomach. “The tide comes. I’ve called a floating fish for you.”

“That’s how we get there?” He raised a skeptical eyebrow, the perfect representation of the gritty city initiate.

Merrisai tossed neon hair and gave him a wicked grin. The one filled with pointed fangs designed to terrorize prey, that she and Seesai had practice together as girls. A wave of disappointment floated over her bravado as he failed to flinch. “No, Captor Canyon. The path into SeaCorp’s secrets is not through a diving airfish. Nor is it as simple as managing to travel to the floating castle.”

She pointed into the distance, at the deepening indigo clouds. The wind already scraped at her face with increasing intensity. “No, samurai. Tonight we ride the storm.”

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Leigh Kimmel and I traded prompts this week. She’s working on “The line of kings spanned unbroken for 2,583 years, until….” and prompted me with The Doors’ Riders on the Storm this week, which fit well as a snippet I’ve been working on. Check out more at More Odds Than Ends!

Images by MidJourney

BioMoon

This week’s prompt, from Leigh Kimmel.

Falona grasped her heavy skirts in a hand heedless of the servants’ long work to press the fabric and darted up the stairs with unseemly haste. Already the air was clearer as she neared the balcony, though the memory of overwhelming perfumes nearly drowned out the delicate scent wafting from the rose trellis.

As always, Eddwyrd had beaten her there. She slowed her steps to a more decorous pace, though she suspected he didn’t inform her father nearly half of what she put him through. Her head bodyguard took each briefing from red-faced, sputtering guard with remarkable aplomb. The worst she’d ever seen him do was keep a white-knuckled hand on his sword as her antics were recounted anew…although the few times he’d given her disappointed looks were so memorable, she flushed with historic guilt.

He was gripping that sword with the same unnatural tension now, though his disappointed gaze was focused on the rose trellis that wafted inward as clearly as the sound of racing boots behind her.

“Sir! Commander Eddwyrd,” gasped the voice behind her. “The princess -“

“Has escaped the ballroom,” Eddwyrd gently cut the man off. “It is a ritual, I’m afraid, reenacted upon each new guard. You did well in coming here to find me rather than creating a panic.”

His pointed gaze prompted her into a curtsy, eyes down to hide the dancing laughter threatening to spoil the ritual. Protocol always made her want to giggle. “I apologize, Sir Willhylm. I felt the need for fresh air and forgot to alert you first.”

Eddwyrd gestured to the other man. “Alert the gardeners, please. The nightroses are beautiful, but the trellis is a security hazard. They will need to replant.”

The man nodded and left, his boots echoing on the white and black marble.

Commander Eddwyrd pulled his bushy eyebrows together. “Aren’t you getting a touch old for this, my lady?”

She tugged her shawl around her shoulders until it was uncomfortably tight. “It felt…desperate. Too loud, too bright, too much. I didn’t like it.”

Eddwyrd was quite still. “I understand.”

She tossed the shawl over the rail. “Besides, balls are boring.”

His dark eyes twinkled. “May it ever be so.”

Falona let her giggle out. She looked up at him with eager impatience. “Did you bring it, Uncle Eddwyrd?”

“I promised you the stars, my lady, and where better than from our typical balcony?” He pulled a tube from his jacket pocket and handed it to her with both hands.

She peered through the end and studied the palace’s reflection in the harbor. “It doesn’t look any closer.”

“It requires lenses to function.”

Falona turned in a swirl of green silk and let out a gasp of delight at the round discs he held in an unfolded scarf several shades darker than her dress. “These will let me see the stars?”

“Ship captains use them, Princess. The same captains you will someday send on trade expeditions and explorations.”

She scuffed a dancing slipper’s toe against the floor, but her foot skated over the polished surface. “And to war.”

“Yes, my lady. If you must.” He fitted the lenses into the tube quickly and bent to hand it back to her.

Her small fingers closed upon the tube, but he didn’t let go. His narrow face was grave. “I shall do my best to advise you upon matters of defense and war, should it come to that. Years from now, of course.”

Falona reached up to touch her adopted uncle’s face. It was sharp with stubble and stiff with the hidden tension she’d seen before. “You will be first among my advisors.”

He laughed, and rose, his face disappearing into shadow. “None of that, now. Come. Let me show you the moons. It is a special night for them, after all.”

Velyum’s third moon was just rising, in all her blue and white striped glory to dominate the night sky. Soon the palace would put out the lanterns, as reflected light would shine near as bright as the sun. “Great hippo, Uncle Eddwyrd! Riskli looks like liquid. Like when Maman puts cream into her caf’fe every morning, before it mixes together.”

“The artificers debate whether it is liquid or gas,” Eddwyrd told her. “But don’t neglect Warso or Shadd.” The smaller moons shown perpetually, and could be glimpsed in the sky even during the brightest of sunlight days. “You see? These two are made of dirt and rock.”

“Who dug the holes on them?” she demanded without removing her eye from the scope.

He laughed gently. “Those craters have been there for generations, my lady, and artificers with enormous lenses, far more powerful than this, say they are only -“

She turned then, as his voice stopped, in time to see a fourth moon, bobbing along with a hiss and a flare of released gas. Faintly, Falona could see white sparkling dust drifting downward from the balloon as it floated across the docks and toward the palace.

“What in hippopotamus?” Eddwyrd spun her around and snatched her shawl from the balcony rail, wrapping it around her face until only her eyes were unconcealed. “No. Leave your mouth covered. No matter how hard it is to breathe.”

He snatched the scope out of her suddenly nerveless hands and tucked the scope back in his pocket without bothering to disassemble it. The dark green scarf he tied over his own face. “Damn the traitorous gardeners. We didn’t factor in those raging balloons. All our estimates were wrong.”

His eyes were focused on the lawn, where shadowy figures with enormous heads – no, heavy masks covering mouths, eyes, and nose – crept closer.

“Take my hand. Do not let go. We run for the tunnels. Do you understand?”

She didn’t, but nodded anyway. And tried to shut her ears as the screaming started, her hand clenched in his until she could no longer feel her fingers.

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