Writer of Fantasy. Wielder of Red Pens.

Author: fionagreywrites (Page 36 of 36)

Tomorrow is Beautiful

You can look up at the moon and see the theme parks anytime the moon is full, these days. Everyone says it looks lopsided when the waning begins and the bubble disappears, but watching it wax open is like watching a strange, stony flower bloom now.

It doesn’t even cost that much to go, thanks to the railgun launches. But it all boiled down to one man’s belief in imagination.

Yeah, I see you know who I mean. So you know the investment he made into getting there, and making sure everyone else could get there too. He thought big, that man.

Good man. Met him once. I was just a kid, but he asked me what I thought on one of the terrestrial rides. Nodded, took me seriously, listened to my suggestions. Even shook my hand. Great man.

Boy, it’s a good thing he lived until the eighties, especially after that health scare he had in the mid-sixties. Experimental treatments saved the day, no kidding there. We nearly lost him, though of course we didn’t know it at the time.

Kept the space program open, he did, after the public lost interest. You think space tourism is good now, well, there’s no way it would have existed without him.

They had a tough time those first few years, too. Gravity works differently, or something. Cost complaints and whatnot. All the math for the coasters had to be redone. I hear the engineers were bouncing around in the first big bubble, pulling their hair out. I bet it was hilarious.

But you can’t have someone go in for a loop-de-loop and wind up launched past the life support. It’s funny, you’d think being launched into space would be enough of a thrill, but everybody wants to do something when they get there.

So yeah. We owe the guy. Big hero. He’s the reason we’ve got a colony program in the works. They’re naming the ship after him, I heard.

Aw, I know I said it was the investment, but it’s never just the money. He kept the dream alive, you know?

Who else coulda done that, eh? You give me one good name.

So what if the moon looks like it has big round ears now?

You want to go to space or not, kid?

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Theme parks on the moon” was my submission for this week’s More Odds Than Ends writing prompt weekly challenge. When I have the time, I’ll take a hack at my own. I’m really curious how they’ll turn out from other people!

Kintsugi

Prompt: A woman wakes up a week after her husband’s funeral. Describe how her morning routine has changed without mentioning her husband.

Note: It turns out that when you start a conversation with “Hey, honey, I have to write about when you’re dead,” the resultant eyebrow twitch and physical removal to a safe distance should be expected. It is, in fact, an appropriate response.

***

The silence was crushing her.

She lay in bed, unwilling to move. It would be generous to still call the late golden sunlight streaming inside “morning.” Light had to be compressed luminosity, full daylight strong, to meander its way past the blackout curtains.

Mornings should be muted dark and nudging, foggy without caffeine, rushed with an exit goal in mind. Or on those rare occasions where time was forgotten, playful and filled with laughter, twisted sheets and warmth.

She turned her head away from the window, repulsed by lost memories. The gaping void of a perfectly-made bed half slapped her in the face as it had every day of the past week instead.

The resultant nausea got her out of bed, at least. She bared her teeth in the mirror, avoiding her reflection’s eyes. Hatred for the toothpaste’s false advertising welled up inside her as she went through mechanical motions. Her smile would not be bright by the time she finished, she knew.

Silence continued to follow her, omniscient and ubiquitous.

The kitchen was finally empty of well-wishers and commiserations she didn’t want. The freezer was stuffed with food she wouldn’t eat. She’d been caught trying to throw it out, but spared the usual and expected lecture on wastefulness. Her mother’s diatribe would have been better than the pitying look.

Automatically setting out two cups for coffee, her hand clenched around the mug on the left.

She wondered if it would be better to shatter it, smash it into pieces. But she put it back, unable to bear the loss of one more memory.

She had no idea how long she stood there, staring into hollow oblivion, waiting for coffee from a cold and quiet machine.

A newly installed door thrust open into the kitchen, hinges squeaking with disuse. Her hand convulsed on the counter at the noise. She turned to find a shaggy black face with a blunt snout and giant brown eyes staring up at her, having trouble with a door flap installed for a giant.

The woman twisted away. What had made her brother give her a puppy? He hated dogs. Dogs only reminded her of unfulfilled dreams. What was she going to do with a gamboling mass of fur that at over twenty pounds was a tenth of his full-grown size?

She sighed. Panting noises followed her around the kitchen. “You have food, newfie,” she muttered downward, and received a cold nose on her leg as a reward.

The couch enveloped her with the ease of long practice. Brown, to hide the inevitable coffee stains, and now apparently also fur. She frowned as the puppy clambered up beside her. It took him three uncoordinated attempts to succeed before he snuggled into her lap, drooling.

“Get down,” she said, but she didn’t mean it. The puppy closed his eyes. Her hand tangled in thick, warm fur, and she realized his breathing had kept the silent fugue from returning.

“Guess I should give you a name.”

***

Edit: Link to More Odds than Ends week one prompt list.

Going backward

Very excited to have June and Peter’s story hit 68K yesterday. I was originally aiming for 90K, but think it might fit better at about 80K.

I’m an underwriter, so the first draft lacks sufficient description. Especially sensory and emotional description, from a quick analysis. All the things DayJob requires me to eliminate, of course.

But then I realized I had notes from early outlining stages at the end of the document. Over three thousands words of notes.

I couldn’t have gotten this far without those notes. I’m grateful I had them. But I wish I’d eliminated them earlier, because going backward is depressing.

A good reason to take a break and get some plot problems analyzed. Made it easy to get started today, and I’m back up above 68k again. Yay!

Edit: I’m calling it, because I’ve reached a point where adding to the story without setting it aside for a while will hurt it more than help. The story itself has been told; it’s just not shiny yet.

2020: Goals, Not Resolutions

This year, I’ve decided I need to do three things.

First, I need to interact more with other authors, which means admitting I am one.

It also means practice. I’ve decided to join the weekly prompt challenge over at More Odds Than Ends. If time permits, I’ll also write the prompt I submit as well. I’ll be posting here and would love feedback – good, bad, or indifferent.

The second thing is figuring out this website thing. It’s 2020. Time to learn more than basic html.

Finally, this is the year to wrap up stories…and publish them. My brain can’t decide whether to squee incessantly or cue ominous music. Bit noisy in here right now.

Back to work!

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