Fiona Grey Writes

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Today’s Book Two Research

I figured a few things out over the weekend, with several plot problems finally resolved. Woo! I’m excited.

Of course, there were several issues that immediately arose, but research is my happy place. Here are a few of today’s searches:

  • Late 1800s geographic & soil composition maps of New Hampshire
  • Famous computer scientists from NH (search results were…interesting. Google, are you okay?)
  • Abandoned mines New Hampshire
  • Effects of sunlight deprivation
  • Buffalo chicken dip recipes

The last one might not be relevant to Paladin’s Legacy. Who could say?

Oh, and I finally got around to naming the buildings. Paladin University is using its recent expansion for some growth.

And please. Let’s not talk about the map of Lost Creek itself just yet. There might still be a lot of empty space to fill besides the campus, a graveyard, June’s apartment, and her beloved Athena diner.

Current campus map, made by a geographically-challenged author.
June’s office is on the second floor of the Hale Building, directly over the end of the word “lower.”

And now, back to actual writing.

Flaming SOS

Peter wrapped a strong arm around June as they left her tiny office. His silent support after the past week was exactly what she needed.

Maybe even more than coffee, the lifeblood that had kept her going this far.

Dry eyes were both itchy and sore. Even a blink hurt. She twisted her head, yawned, and hoped for hydration. It might take a miracle at this point.

“Parking lot’s on fire,” she mumbled, and felt him stiffen against her before letting her go. Her gaze drifted to the staircase. Ancient carpeting had never looked so welcoming. Surely a few minutes reprieve would be worth the cost of getting up again?

He stared out the window, lips tight and shoulders tense. “Not a bonfire. June, we need to go.”

“Mm-kay.” Another yawn, cut off as he rushed her into the chill autumn air. Her leather jacket wasn’t enough anymore, but she didn’t have anything better for New Hampshire yet.

Peter hurried her toward the faculty lot, a trip normally enjoyable with old-fashioned lampposts and – at the moment – the crunch and scent of crushed fallen leaves. “That’s what I was afraid of.”

“What?” She looked at the fire, which came in spurts of jetting, horizontal flame. Adrenaline flooded her system, overriding exhaustion. “You’ve got to be kidding me.”

“I don’t have an explanation.”

The words came out in a whisper as she took a hesitant step forward toward her ancient truck, its headlights somehow replaced with fireworks flares that repeated in a pattern. “Big Red? What happened to you? Who would do this?”

“Better yet,” Peter started, and cleared his throat. His Irish lilt was stronger when he tried again. “Ah, perhaps we should be asking instead why your truck is flaming an SOS at us.”

***

This week, Cedar Sanderson prompted me with “The old truck blasted a stream of flames from where its headlights ought to be.” My prompt went to Leigh Kimmel: The tree reached out and bopped her on the nose with a bright green leaf.

Greek Tragedy

Lisse nudged Marc with a black-clad and kept her voice low. “Theater manager’s furious.”

He nodded, his headset’s microphone bobbing up and down. “That lady in the front row keeps laughing at the wrong parts.”

She pulled her gloves back on and gripped the rope. The timing was automatic by now, after thousands of rehearsals and shows. “It’s throwing off the actors. Estelle already ran offstage crying. Her understudy’s just not as good.”

The frantic hyena cackle came screeching backstage again. Lisse was already in motion, but the sound jarred her enough the rope sped up inadvertently. Her fingers wrenched as her palms heated through ancient gloves.

“Quick!” The hiss came from where Marc wasn’t supposed to be. “Director’s kicking her out!”

Marc and Lisse rushed to stage left and peeked through the layers of curtains. As was to be expected, the director had a flair for the dramatic, one honed by an ego the size of Broadway, if not quite the talent. His aggrieved flounce was positively indignant, with one beringed hand over his heart and the other waving a clipboard.

“Jack, follow spot.” Marc tapped the button on his ancient, wired headset automatically.

Lisse looked upward, squinting against the glare. Jack was a blur in dark clothing behind an enormous spotlight now focused on the drama unfolding at center stage.

“Madam, please, you are disrupting the show!” He had a flair for sotto voce projection, the kind actors and audience alike hushed to hear.

The thick Greek accent floated easily backstage. “As if the daughters of Ares would ever need to marry! What a farce! Oh, good show!”

Lisse blinked as the woman rose to her feet, and dodged Marc’s startled drawback before his shoulder hit her throat.

The cackling continued until the woman had slammed the auditorium door, which was merely a factor of how hard she’d hit the exit, not a factor of intent.

“She…”

“Back to work!” The director barreled straight for them, pale lips pressed tight.

Marc scurried out of the way. Lisse gripped the rope again. “But she had a sword…”

***

I got stuck this week and had no idea what to do with AC Young’s challenge at first. Hopefully I did it justice, even though I took it liberally as an idea. “The local theatre had put out the adverts for their latest production, “Seven Grooms for Seven Sisters”. Apparently it was an Amazon’s favourite musical…”

My prompt went to Cedar Sanderson: “The grid pattern showing the safe path flashed once, twice, and then vanished.”

Animal Expectations

“I never – ever – expected this.” I panted between words, fingers turning white with blood loss as the baby minotaur lunged for his parents. Actual blood loss might happen from the spikes in the thick, stiff leather, but that’s all in a day’s work here.

The assistant got the door shut finally, and at least the little guy couldn’t escape. Again.

That’s when the howls began. I swear to you, my ears blistered. “Look, you’re new. Move!”

I hip-checked the new girl sideways. Off to the side, and now the brat with the dark curling horns could see his mom again, cooing through the narrow glass window in the door. The mom must be older than I thought, though I suppose it could have been the florescent lighting in the lobby. Her own ridges had faded and gleamed the polished yellow of bone. I’d never heard of it happening before age thirty with a minotaur.

Maybe that explained why the son was such a spoiled brat. Only a single kid? Minotaurs were family-oriented, and didn’t like to be alone. I’d have expected her to be swarmed with a herd of five or more by now. We kept the backyard of the practice poop-scooped just for when they came in. Get them out of the way. Maybe get some entertainment if they formed an impromptu soccer team.

I jolted out of my thoughts when the horns made contact with that muscle right above my knee with a painful twang. At least the screaming had stopped. The new girl had distracted him with photos of her cat. Most of the magical creatures community found human-style pets hilarious, and this kid was no exception, snort-laughing his way through some photos.

Until he let out an ooooOOOoooo and the new girl snatched the phone away with a crimson blush.

It was enough time for me to remember her name, anyway. Maybe.

“Jessica, can you hand me that?” I wasn’t dumb enough to name the shining silver instrument, just pointed behind the kid’s back. It wasn’t my first day.

Twenty minutes later, brat was back with Mommy, looking for all the world an angel. I waved goodbye like it wasn’t eight AM and already down three cups of coffee, wondering if I could talk the mother into coming by later to talk about some fertility treatments.

“So what didn’t you expect?”

I shut the door, slumped down on the bench, and let out a yawn so big the tendon in my jaw popped. “Huh?”

“You said you didn’t expect this.” Jessica was wiping down the counter, her face fresh and earnest, frizzled hair escaping a neat bun after the horns had caught and tugged it loose.

I wrinkled the nose at the memory of what we’d been doing at the time. “Oh. Yeah. You open an exotic pets practice, you think you’ll focus on lizards, hedgehogs, maybe the occasional monkey. Maybe work at a zoo for a while, that’d be cool. Then next thing you know, all the stories Grandma told you are real.”

She grinned. “It’s so amazing.”

At least, I think that’s what she said. It was some slang that meant the same thing – assuming I translated properly. The mwah-mwah incomprehensible phrase just made me feel ancient, and I was tired enough after last night’s emergency.

“Yeah, sure, but next thing you know, some centaur’s got a toothache and you’re not a dentist. A gryphon has anxiety and is plucking his own feathers out, and you’re not a psychiatrist. Where else do they go?”

“Seems like you’re a good option,” Jessica said loyally. Aw, the attempt was cute. She’d been here all of five minutes, but the loyal ones either ran screaming the first week or stayed forever. We’d find out in a few days which she really was.

“They don’t teach this stuff in vet school,” I pointed out. “I’m going off folklore and home remedies, writing the textbook that can never be published as I go by trial and error. I’m just trying to keep them from getting killed.”

My lab coat pocket buzzed. Pulling out my phone, I smiled faintly and showed her the photo. “Success story. This is Fritz. Doing fine now after last night’s trauma.”

“Cute horse,” she said, and tossed something in the trash can. The chemical scent of cleanser now filled the small room. It was a definite improvement. “I know you have a reputation, but somebody has to take care of the normal creatures, too, even if they’re exotic to most humans.”

I looked at the dappled grey colt and let out a snort. “I’d agree with you, but if you’re going to work here, you’re going to have to recognize a unicorn that’s lost his horn.”

She snatched the phone. “What?”

“See the divot?” I yawned and wondered if another cup of coffee would start the shakes. “He walked into a wall and got stuck. He’ll lose his magic until it grows back. Poor guy. We tried to avoid that option. His parents are furious, too.”

The door burst open. Lizzie was the best admin ever, but her sweater was ruined with what looked like claw snags, and parts of her long hair were weighted down with something caught in them. Almost as if the tips of her hair had become something else…I frowned.

“Doc, we need you now with the basilisk in room three. Now!” Lizzie fled.

A roar and a thump came through the supposedly soundproofed walls the neighbors had insisted upon after the first week. I yawned again and struggled to my feet.

Jessica looked a peculiar, pale shade of greenish-grey, like a human formed from motionless putty.

“You coming?”

***

This week, AC Young prompted me with “When you opened your exotic pets practice, you didn’t expect to be called out to deal with a mythical creature’s toothache.”

My challenge went to Cedar Sanderson: “3,000 years from now, archaeologists discover the Corn Palace.”

But Ghouls Don’t *DO* That

Let’s talk about research.

This is the part where most people back quietly away, eyes twitching while their feet seek the nearest exit at speed. Meanwhile, I’m rubbing my hands together with glee. Writers search the best and weirdest topics, often all in a slew of odd searches, one after the other as tangents spark ideas down the rabbit hole.

For instance:

  • Are magnolias poisonous? (No, or at least insufficiently that plot idea was out.)
  • What do magnolias smell like? (Different depending on the type and time of year.)
  • Washers at the ford legend (Check out these death omen song lyrics.)
  • What do ghouls eat? (Disputed, but…do you really want to know?)

That doesn’t mean the story that spits itself out of my head via the keyboard will be technically accurate in all details. I’m writing fiction here, after all. Too much reality is boring. Plus, half the time the story’s about a creature that a) does not exist and b) has at least fifteen different versions of the story.

Case in point: Halima found comfort in cinnamon sticks in The Fire Crown, because some phoenix legends say their nests are built from warming spices.

But I do want to know where I go wrong, and try to make a deliberate and conscious choice.

So yes. I am aware that ghouls are very, very different from zombies. Bite transmission is not a thing.

But Grave Girl needed “you’re my girl” to become “you’re my ghoul” for the play on words to work, so I took some liberties.

I do, however, offer my sincere apologies to any ghouls reading this.

Grave Girl

Part I: Darkened Dreams

Dabria woke up with a shudder. “Not again.” The collar of her sleep shirt was damp and sticky with sweat, but she knew if she got up to change, she’d wake Luke.

Instead she rolled back over to him and interwove her fingers through his, and he responded with a squeeze even in his sleep. It was ritual with them, through more than a decade of dating and marriage. She’d thought it odd at first, that he’d wanted to keep a hand on her while sleeping.

She couldn’t sleep without it now. The habit made traveling for work exponentially harder, especially recovering from fatigue afterward.

But then, compared to Luke, she slept like the dead anyway.

“Can’t sleep?”

Her shoulder jerked. “I didn’t realize you were awake.”

“Mmm.” He pulled her over, and she tucked into him. “Bad dreams again?”

She let out a sigh and nodded, even though there was no way he’d see it in the dark room with its blackout curtains. “Must’ve died three times in that one. Swordfight, riot, drowning.”

“I’ve got you.” He wrapped his arm around her and squeezed. “You’re my girl.”

“You’re my guy.” The words were soothing ritual, a promise that all was right with the universe. Dabria marveled again at how lucky she’d been to find this man. “I think it was the washers at the ford. The death omens.”

“Sleep, baby. It’ll be okay.” Within minutes, his breathing slowed and deepened in her ear.

She didn’t know when she joined him. When she woke up again, she’d sprawled away from his embrace, one hand underneath her pillow and dangling behind the bed.

Her dreams hadn’t been pleasant, but this time they brushed away with wakefulness, a riot of soundless color and blurred snapshots in time as scenes vanished from memory.

She stretched, trying not to wake Luke again. Flexing her fingers, she started to draw her hand back into bed.

And closed her fingers on something that should have been empty space.

The scream echoed through the room, more an angry duck squawk at full volume over the high-pitched horror movie classic.

“What?” Luke was already stumbling on bare feet, looking around for the threat. The Ka-bar kept discretely in a nightstand holster was already in his hand.

Dabria pointed to behind the metal headrest from where she huddled in the bed, covers still tucked over her knees. “Something – something is down there.”

He lowered the knife to his side. “Baby, spiders happen.”

She swallowed hard. “No. No. I think – I think it was a finger. I touched something, and it felt bony and alive and cold and –“

He held up his free hand. “Okay. I’ll take a look. Okay?”

She nodded, grateful he was willing to look and that her voice had stopped shaking. “Thank you. I know it’s stupid. But it really felt like a finger.”

He still had the knife in his hand when the pillows moved. She heard the noise and turned, just in time to find herself caught inside the tangled blankets.

The creature burst from behind the headboard and bit her shoulder, just below the joint. She threw back her head and screamed in pain and shock, frantically pushing the head away.

It tore her flesh further as Luke yanked it backward. The blade flashed, the creature choked, and she didn’t care what it was as long as it was dead, dead, dead.

Blood trickled between her fingers as she pressed a hand to the wound. Luke left the knife embedded in the creature’s throat and started for her. His gaze was fixed on her shoulder.

Dabria let out a warbling, incoherent cry, pointing behind him.

The creature was standing, reaching for her husband, knife looking like one of those old joke arrows through the head and just as funny.

Luke seized the knife, but she couldn’t tell what he did. Dust burst over the room, and with it, she did not mind falling into darkness.

She did not wake until darkness rose again, and did not dream.

Part II: Forever is Forever

He looked up from chopping vegetables as movement flickered outside the kitchen window. Dabria stood at the fence line, staring over the wooden barrier and into the cemetery, barely glimpsed over steadily increasing shadows in the dusky gloom.

Luke set the knife down and wiped his hands, then headed for the back door and toward his wife in her spiderweb skirts of gauze, blending into the shadows as if she were a fleeting wisp of cloud.

Her head didn’t turn as he joined her, clasping his left hand over her right atop the fence. Moonlight rippled in the pond’s reflection.

“This is my life now,” she murmured. “I always enjoyed cemeteries. It never bothered me to live next door to one. The shadows and statues. Black-green moss and worn carvings, speckled with blue-green lichen.”

His fingers tightened upon hers. “It’s not so dramatic as that.”

“Isn’t it?” She turned to him at last, waving her free hand at her face. “Tell me this is not a story of grief.”

He sucked in a breath. In less than twelve hours, her cheeks had hollowed. Deep, purplish-black surrounded eyes that gleamed reflective yellow when she looked toward the house, where the kitchen’s light spilled into the backyard.

She held out her other hand to him. “Yesterday I had a tan. This evening?”

Luke swallowed, his throat dry. “It’s hard to tell in this light.”

“Humans aren’t meant to be grey, baby. You know which emoji has the grey skin tone? Zombie.”

He seized her wrist and pulled her close. “Let me warm you up at least. It’s freezing out here.”

“I think it’s going to be cold for a long time,” she whispered, but laid her head against his shoulder and wrapped her arms around his waist.

He snuffled a laugh into her hair. “So dinnertime is different now. The darkness has always been your friend. We’ll just need to be more nocturnal than we used to be. Moonlight walks instead of sunsets. It’ll take some time to adjust, but we’ll get there.”

They sat underneath the magnolia tree, the one they’d planted shortly after he’d moved in, before they got married. This was their spot, where she’d fed birds and planned the backyard gardens while he’d done the labor. He’d even proposed here, and had been irrationally worried about a squirrel running off with the ring before he could get Dabria to come outside. Its lemon-honey scent surrounded them above cool earthiness of fresh-turned dirt, waxy leaves evergreen in the unexpectedly cool evening.

“They say in Louisiana, magnolias mask the smell of the dead when the floods disinter the bodies.” Her voice broke on the last word into a sob.

“It doesn’t matter.” He tightened his grip. “This is our magnolia. Ours. Nothing can take that away. There are no bad memories here.”

“Forever is forever?”

“What else could it be?” he answered, his mind whirling. “Through all the changes. Whatever they may be. I’m not letting go of you.”

She sniffled. “I’m tired, baby. So tired.”

His hand clamped on hers not long after, their knees touching. Luke fell asleep and woke up an undetermined time later, still holding Dabria’s hand.

Blinking in the moonlight streaming through the blinds, he realized she was watching him with those odd reflective eyes.

“Can’t sleep,” she whispered. “I’m not sure I sleep anymore.”

“It’s okay. I’m right here with you.” He squeezed her hand and rubbed his thumb over her palm before drawing her cold, bony fingers to his lips for a kiss.

“I know. You’re my guy.”

Her smile wavered in the moonlight, though it could have been the tears in his eyes.

“And you’re my ghoul. I love you, baby.”

***

This week on More Odds Than Ends, things went in unusual (but hopefully good) directions. As is to be expected given the moniker odd prompts…AC Young turned frozen birds into a space war and rescue (go read it in the comments; it’s good!). Meanwhile, I took Leigh Kimmel’s prompt about what was under the magnolia tree and turned it into something either romantic or morbid.

You decide.

The Sewer

“Break. Five minutes, lads. Countdown begins now.” I hit the clock and twisted, trying to get the kink out from between my shoulder blades. Every trip, knots bury themselves hard beneath my skin, like a strange sort of game of marbles. My body plays itself, using my stress to raise the stakes.

Don’t get me wrong. The money after a successful trip is wildly generous, and I take full advantage. I’m fresh as a daisy – not that anyone remembers what that means these days, but that’s the saying – by the time I have to cross the Sewers again.

“Cap’n.” The slurred word isn’t a question, but there it is. The indicator that precedes the question.

Technically, I should be an admiral by now. If we were still in the Milky Way, close to Mother Earth, I would be, but then I’d be trapped in bureaucracy and screaming with boredom. Out here with a ragtag fleet cobbled together with duct tape and wire? You get what the crews’ll give you, and this one comes with a bob of respect along with the inevitable question.

It’s the same every time. The new guys all ask. “Why the break?”

I grunted and kept my eyes on the scanner. Pointed at some blobs on the screen. “Piki, you see this?”

A nod, caught in peripheral vision. He hovers, trying to see without getting closer.

“Move up if you want to.” I don’t mind giving away my tricks. I do this because I want the challenge and to get away from the world, not for the money. The more of us out here in the Sewer, the more chance of rescue when I’m the one who bites it this time.

Usually I’m the one doing the rescuing. Apparently I’ve got a reputation.

And so, the question, every time. Asking why we stop isn’t literal. They want to know how I do it. How I’ve gotten so many fleets through.

He inches over with a shuffle, and I hear the slight wheeze of his breathing.

“Look, this here is our fleet. Everyone’s transiting real slow through this shit.” That’s why they call it the Sewer. Everyone has the same reaction when they see it. Wrinkled nose, trying to dodge, hoping you make it through without an explosion. A crappy path, mined out and filled with debris. Moving debris.

Supposedly the companies that drilled out here were going to clean it up before an asteroid strike had them cut their losses. I’d believe that if they hadn’t mined in a damn asteroid belt to begin with. It’s still the best way from point A to B, at least until they come up with a better starship drive that can skip it entirely.

I keep my eye on the tech developments. Too young to retire, dontcha know. But wormholes or gate jumping in space, that’ll be the sign. Retire or head west, no-longer-young-man, until the next planet ends the adventure with an ammonia atmosphere or an alien melts my brain.

“That’s the fleet. We’re waiting for them to catch up.”

He rubs a hand over his nose and leans toward the screen. “Because everything backs up in the Toilets.”

I pull my lips back in a grimace. The safe path is ridiculously narrow, and this is the worst of it. It’s why I stop just past when I’m escorting a fleet through. “Yeah. So we wait to see if we’re needed for rescue.”

I stab a finger at the screens and the view switches to our plotted course with a bright red, dotted line. It’s the safe path specific for this particular flight through the asteroids, charted with more AI than is good for anyone and updated continuously with my personal VFR. The ships don’t join the fleet if they aren’t willing to follow it precisely.

“Flow like water, around obstacles. But make sure you clear the path behind you, not just in front of you.”

The countdown flashes the one minute warning. Piki bobs his head again, thin shoulders shuffling. “So you remember you’re human.”

“Yeah.” I flip the screen back and lean back with a satisfied grin. “That’s really all there is to it. You see the dots onscreen? I see the same number as when I went in.”

He lets out a whoop that echoes weirdly with the countdown buzzer, then heads back to his station with his head down when the others return. It’s the loudest I’ve ever heard him.

I’m relieved, too, but can’t let that show in front of the crew. They expect calm and steady, just as they know rock-solid that five minutes is all it’s safe to pause, because that’s all I gave them. Every contingency planned for and thirteen different types of anticipation for any eventuality.

Also, cleanup’s a bitch. Especially when it’s a euphemism for salvage, not rescue. It’s easy to lose your humanity out here when mistakes will kill in ways you can’t anticipate. To get callous about things you never dreamed you’d laugh about, even though we came to the stars to ensure humanity survived.

But you’d think more people would get the point about treating the spaceflow path of a fleet like water, and the Sewer like plumbing. Especially given the name of the ship.

I reach for the comms and let the relief channel through my words. “Alligator Fleet, this is Plumber Actual. Damage assessment requested…”

***

“When the sewers backed up, the alligators started coming out of the toilets…” I knew I wanted to do something different than the obvious with ‘nother Mike’s prompt this week, but all credit for this idea goes to The Husband.

My prompt went to Cedar Sanderson, and I can’t wait to see what she does with a penguin attack!

The Gift

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***

I didn’t know what to do with this week’s prompt, initially, only what I didn’t want to do. This was definitely a challenge that wound up with an unexpected ending, and I definitely enjoyed it. Thanks, Leigh! I hope you enjoyed our trade this week about the stuffed toy astronaut left in warning.

Centaurs on Vacation

Water lapped at the docks with quiet repetition. Soft music shifted as they strolled down the weathered planks between restaurants. Fairy lights began to provide additional atmosphere as birds flew their last twilight missions, hurrying with the last bits of twigs and worms.

Hand in hand, each of them eating soft serve ice cream with their free hands. All in all, it was the epitome of a restful summer day in New Hampshire.

Peter gave June a nudge. “You see that?”

She popped the last bite of her vanilla cone into her mouth. “Argh. Some tourist left their purse behind, looks like. I’ll go see if there’s a wallet.”

He squeezed her hand briefly and let go. “I think I see a uniform up there. I’ll go see if it’s a policeman.”

June sat on the wooden bench and leaned over the straw tote with a giant pink flower. The purse shifted, and she caught an expensive DSLR camera before it hit the ground with a sigh of relief.

Her touch woke the camera from technological sleep. The back lit up with the last photo taken. June paused, unfamiliar with the device and uncomfortable with uncertain ethics of viewing another’s photos without explicit permission.

“Maybe it’ll give a clue if they’re still in the area,” she muttered to herself, and zoomed in on the first image.

A group of tourists stood atop one Rattlesnake mountain. One had – the body of a horse? An illusion, of course. A trick of angles. How would a horse make the hike?

Another man seemed to have wings. Surely, a convenient cloud. She squinted, finding it difficult to focus on the man’s face. That peculiar golden glow must be from sunlight.

She pressed the back arrow to move to the next photo. A hydra stood in front of Lake Winnipesaukee’s brilliant blue waters, each of its nine heads grinning with exuberant energy and wearing a different hat.

“Excuse me,” a voice interrupted.

June looked up into dark sunglasses that were no longer appropriate for the steadily increasing dusk. Dyed green dreadlocks fell to shoulder length above a floaty wrap dress covered in flowers that matched the one on the purse – and the photographs – precisely.

“This must be yours,” June said, handing the woman the bag. “I was hoping to find a clue. My boyfriend went to find…”

The woman’s thick braided hair moved with a faint hiss. The woman didn’t use her hands to push it back.

She felt the blood rush out of her face, and was suddenly very glad the gorgon had worn her glasses.

“Er…” she managed.

The woman turned back toward June, apprehension across her face. “Yes?”

She managed an unsteady grin. “Welcome to Lost Creek.”

***

I grabbed a spare from the Odd Prompts this week, as I forgot what day it was. Oops!

Check out last week’s belated entry here.

Hidden Hybrids


“It was a strange sort of hybrid, I tell you.” Jed gulped back a glass of whiskey with a quick toss. From his wobble and the fumes, it wasn’t his first. But his hand still shook more than adrenaline could explain.

Who’d have thought? Jed Nelson was afraid. In front of the whole town, no less.

I wondered what would happen when he sobered up and realized he needed to deny the whole thing, or claim to have had a fit like his uncle did years back. Stark raving mad, that man was, but he never recovered.

I suddenly wondered if Jed would sober up.

But he continued. “I tell you, it looked as though its front half was the front-end of a lion with silver fur, and its back half was the rear-end of a dragon. Complete with wings! And with gold scales.”

“And you didn’t bring me a one o’ them gold scales, didja?” One of the barmaids sneered at him. All this time he’d spent here and he hadn’t tipped her yet.

I hastily reached into my wallet and slid her a fiver. I wouldn’t miss this for the world. Who’d have thought Jed would go down in a blaze of embarrassment like this?

You can’t live down embarrassment in a small town. Not really. You’re always “the one who…” after something this big.

I knocked back my own drink, and was emboldened enough to join in after I caught a glimpse of the bar’s namesake.

“Pretty sure it was Tabitha.” Heads turned in unison, watching the black tabby lick her front paw from atop the unused pool table. She wove her way in between the scattered, colorful object balls a whirl.

Laughter broke out, and I took another sip to hide a slight smile. Jed had gotten one over on me years back, and I’d lived with the shame since.

We didn’t think anything of the roar outside. Just another rattletrap pickup wheezing its last gasps. Another bike from some tough guy who wanted to be tougher than he was. Not until the walls broke in with a blast worse than the tornadoes back in ’19.

But I didn’t mind so much when Jed got eaten first. If I had to die tonight, drunk and watching my mortal enemy go first wasn’t a bad way to go. Right?

***
I’m late, very late! I was on vacation and lost track of the days. Last week’s prompt was from AC Young, about a spectacular hybrid. Mine went to nother Mike, who did a fantastic job with the wight board (yep, that’s spelled right). Check it out here – and come join the fun, if you’re so inclined!
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